Re: The Novel ~ Touchstone ...
Well, clearly I've not got the right map. I've re-instated chapter 2. Without it, chapters 3 and 4 don't make sense. But I've cleared out all the twigs, stones, nettles and litter so hopefully, it will be a more interesting read. I've tried to make the stone stonier and show not tell ... words from uni days I'll never forget.
Not brave enough to print chapter 2 yet ... letting it have a few days to settle down.
Here's to chapter 3 ...
Gillian
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